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Jan. 29th, 2002 08:50 pmÎðèãèíàë
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kiri - òóìàí, äûìêà.
shigure - õîëîäíûé äîæäü ïîçäíåé îñåíè èëè íà÷àëà çèìû.
Fuji - ãîðà Ôóäçè.
mi - ñìîòðåòü íà.
nu - îòðèöàíèå.
hi - äåíü. Âñ¸ âìåñòå: mi-nu hi - "äåíü, êîãäà íå âèäíî".
zo - ÷àñòèöà óñèëåíèÿ.
omoshiroki - èíòåðåñíûé, ïðèâëåêàòåëüíûé. Òàêèì îáðàçîì, zo omoshiroki - "ïðèâëåêàòåëüíåé".
霧時雨
富士お見ぬ日ぞ
面白き
Kiri-shigure
Fuji o mi-nu hi zo
omoshiroki
Ïåðåâîä ñëîâ
kiri - òóìàí, äûìêà.
shigure - õîëîäíûé äîæäü ïîçäíåé îñåíè èëè íà÷àëà çèìû.
Fuji - ãîðà Ôóäçè.
mi - ñìîòðåòü íà.
nu - îòðèöàíèå.
hi - äåíü. Âñ¸ âìåñòå: mi-nu hi - "äåíü, êîãäà íå âèäíî".
zo - ÷àñòèöà óñèëåíèÿ.
omoshiroki - èíòåðåñíûé, ïðèâëåêàòåëüíûé. Òàêèì îáðàçîì, zo omoshiroki - "ïðèâëåêàòåëüíåé".
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Date: 2002-01-29 05:51 am (UTC)Èíà÷å ïîëó÷èòñÿ ïðîñòî ïåðåâîä ñ àíãëèéñêîãî !
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