Òóðíèðíîå õàéêó íîìåð 5

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Íåìíîãî ðîìàíòèêè, è íè÷åãî ñëîæíîãî.
Èññà.

Îðèãèíàë

君なくて
まことに多大の
木立哉

Kimi nakute
makoto ni tadai no
Kodachi kana

Ïåðåâîä (íåêîòîðûõ) ñëîâ

Kimi - òû (ïðè îáðàùåíèè ê æåíùèíå).
nakute - ñîîòâåòñòâóåò àíãëèéñêîìó “there isn’t”.
tadai - ìíîãî.
kodachi - ðîùà.

Ê ñòûäó ñâîåìó íå ìîãó âñåãî íàéòè. Ïîýòîìó îïÿòü Áëàéñ çà ïðåäñåäàòåëÿ:

Without you, in truth,
Too many and too wide
Are the groves.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Ïîçâîëþ ñåáå äîáàâèòü åùå îäíî çíà÷åíèå kana: "àõ!", âõîäÿùåå ïðèìåðíî â òîò æå ðÿä. Ïîæàëóé, ÿ áûë íåïðàâ, è "àõ" ëó÷øå ïîäõîäèò â êà÷åñòâå ïåðåâîäà, ÷åì "óâû".