Òóðíèðíîå õàéêó íîìåð 2

Îðèãèíàë

秋近き
心の寄るや
四じょ半

Aki chikaki
Kokoro no yoru ya
Yo-jo-han.

Ïåðåâîä ñëîâ

aki - îñåíü.
chikaki - áëèçêî.
kokoro - ñåðäöå.
no - ñóôôèêñ ïðèíàäëåæíîñòè.
yoru - ñòàíîâèòüñÿ áëèæå, çàâèñåòü îò.
ya - ýòà ñïåöèôè÷åñêàÿ âåùü îáúÿñíÿåòñÿ òàê: «ñîåäèíèòåëüíàÿ ÷àñòèöà äëÿ âûðàæåèÿ ñèëüíîãî âïå÷àòëåíèÿ, ýìîöèè, âîñõèùåíèÿ, âîñêëèöàíèÿ» .
yo-jo-han - êîìíàòà â ÷åòûðå ñ ïîëîâèíîé òàòàìè. ×èñòî ÿïîíñêàÿ ñèñòåìà ìåð. ×òî óäèâèòåëüíî – ïðèìåíÿåòñÿ è ñåé÷àñ. Ò.å. ïðè ñú¸ìå êâàðòèðû âû óñëûøèòå íå ñêîëüêî â íåé êâ. ìåòðîâ, à ñêîëüêî â íåé òàòàìè.

Íàøåë

êîììåíòàðèé Áëàéñà (Blyth) ê ýòîìó õàéêó, à òàêæå åãî ïåðåâîä.
Ïåðåâîä, åñòåñòâåííî, ïîòîì.

When summer is ending, and autumn approaches, poetical people feel drawn to the small room where the tea ceremony is held. Tea, like nature itself, belongs to no particular season, yet as the energy of summer declines, the meditative mood, a more passive state of mind arises, and we wish to express the harmony and beauty of life in a meeting of friends, an association with simple and beautiful things only, and for this mood the tea ceremony was made, since out of this it proceeded.

Êñòàòè

íàäåþñü âñå ïîíèìàþò, ÷òî ïåðåâîäû íóæíî ïðèñëàòü äî çàâòðàøíåãî óòðà (âàøåãî óòðà), à ïîòîì ÿ âûñòàâëþ òðåòüå õàéêó - äî ïîíåäåëüíèêà. Òóò ÿ ðåøèë íàðóøèòü òðàäèöèþ è ïðåäëîæèòü êîå-÷òî ëàêîìîå èç Èññû.