Ïåðåâîäû 3-ãî Òóðà
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A straw-mat;
The Milky Way aslant
In the saucepan.
Àîé:
Âûòåðòûé êîâðèê.
Íåáî òå÷åò èç ãîðøêà
Ìëå÷íîé ðåêîþ.
Ïèíêó:
 ãëèíÿíîé ÷àøå
Ìëå÷íûé Ïóòü îáîãíóë
Îñòðîâîê ñóøè
Êóðîé:
Íà öèíîâêå
Êîòåëîê âñêèïåë, è â íåì
Ìëå÷íûé ïóòü ïðîëåã.
Ñóìèðå:
Ñìîòðþ â êàñòðþëþ:
Ìëå÷íûé ïóòü ÷åðåç íåáî -
Êîñòî÷êà â ñóïå.
Ìèäîðè:
Ïëåòåíûé êîâðèê.
Ãîðøîê ñ ïîõëåáêîé âìåñòèò
Çâåçäíîå íåáî.
Êèðîé:
ñêàòåðòü íà ñòîëå
è ìëå÷íûé ïóòü êëóáèòñÿ
íà äíå ëîõàíêè
Øèðîé:
 óãëó öèíîâêà,
ðÿäîì êîòåëîê, à â í¸ì -
âåñü Ìëå÷íûé Ïóòü.
Àêàé:
Æóõëûé ïîëîâèê.
 êîòåëêå íàèñêîñîê
Ìëå÷íûé Ïóòü çàñòðÿë
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È äàæå ëó÷øå ïåðåäàåò ìèðîîùóùåíèå Èññû, ÷åì îí ñàì - è Âñåëåííàÿ â ãîðøêå, è êîñòî÷êà íå çàáûòà.
Àîé - ïðîñòî ïðåëåñòü.
Èãðà ñëîâ ó Ïèíêó, êîíå÷íî, õîðîøà, íî ïåðåâîä îò ýòîãî, êàæåòñÿ ïîòåðÿë.
"Æóõëûé êîâðèê" - ýòî ñèëüíî.
Àêàé
Date: 2002-02-06 04:11 am (UTC)Re: Àêàé
Date: 2002-02-06 04:14 am (UTC)Øèðîé ñ÷èòàåò, ÷òî
Date: 2002-02-06 04:34 am (UTC)Ìíå, íàâåðíîå, áîëüøå âñåõ ïîíðàâèëèñü Àîé, Ïèíêó è Ìèäîðè. Õîòÿ, òÿæåëî ñêàçàòü.
Re: Øèðîé ñ÷èòàåò, ÷òî
Date: 2002-02-06 04:37 am (UTC)Re: Øèðîé ñ÷èòàåò, ÷òî
Re: Øèðîé ñ÷èòàåò, ÷òî
Re: Øèðîé ñ÷èòàåò, ÷òî
Date: 2002-02-06 04:43 am (UTC)Íó è äîñòàíåòñÿ òåáå îò Ñóìèðå. ß áû íå ïîòåðïåë.
Re: Øèðîé ñ÷èòàåò, ÷òî
Date: 2002-02-06 05:27 am (UTC)Ñóìèðå.
Àêàé
Date: 2002-02-06 08:33 am (UTC)Àîé - õîðîøàÿ íàõîäêà ñ íåáåñíîé ðåêîé, íå î÷åíü íðàâèòñÿ "âûòåðòûé".
Ïèíêó - íèêàêîé ñâÿçè ñ îðèãèíàëîì.
Êóðîé - ñòðóêòóðà ïðåäëîæåíèÿ ïðåäïîëàãàåò ïðè÷èííî-ñëåäñòâåííóþ ñâÿçü ìåæäó êèïåíèåì è îòðàæåíèåì Ìëå÷íîãî Ïóòè, êîòîðàÿ íåÿñíà.
Ñóìèðå - õîðîøî!
Ìèäîðè - ñëèøêîì äàëåêî îò îðèãèíàëà, çðèòåëüíûé îáðàç çàìåíåí ìåòàôîðîé âìåñòèòåëüíîñòè
Êèðîé - òî æå, ÷òî Ìèäîðè
Øèðîé - ëó÷øå âñåõ.
Àêàé - íåïëîõî, åäèíñòâåííûé, êîìó óäàëîñü âìåñòèòü íàìåê íà âðåìÿ ãîäà. Íî íàìåê êîðÿâûé.
Re: Àêàé
Ìîæíî ñêàçàòü, ýòî ïðÿìî âàëèò ñ íîã ïðè ïåðâîì ïðî÷òåíèè. Âîò áû ìíå òàêèå ñëîâà âñïîìèíàòü !
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Date: 2002-02-06 11:27 pm (UTC)Àêàé-ñàí!
Ïðàâèëüíî ëè ÿ ïîíÿë,
÷òî îñåíüþ ïòèöû óëåòàþò,
à ïîëîâèêè æóõíóò?
Èëè íàìåê çàêëþ÷àåòñÿ â ÷åì-òî äðóãîì?
Ëþáîçíàòåëüíûé Ïèíêó
Re: ?
Date: 2002-02-06 11:39 pm (UTC)Re: ?
Date: 2002-02-07 12:37 am (UTC)Îò íàìåêîâ Àêàÿ?
Ïèíêó
Re: ?
Date: 2002-02-07 12:43 am (UTC)Tol'ko serjezno.
Re: ?
Date: 2002-02-07 01:01 am (UTC)ß äóìàþ òàê:
"Æóõëûé" ãîâîðèòñÿ î âåùè,
êîòîðàÿ ñïåðâà áûëà áîäðÿ÷êîì,
à ïîòîì óñòàëà.
Ïîëîâèêè æå îò ðîæäåíèÿ ñêëîííû ê ïåññèìèçìó.
Ïèíêó
Äîïîëíåíèå Ïèíêó
Date: 2002-02-07 01:22 am (UTC)Àêàé
Íî åñëè áû ìåíÿ ñïðîñèëè, ê êàêîé ïîðå ãîäà îòíîñèòñÿ ñëîâî "æóõëûé", îòâåò áûë áû îäíîçíà÷íûì.
Ïèíêó áîèòñÿ
ß íå ðåøàþñü
Ïèíêó â óæàñå
Date: 2002-02-07 07:15 am (UTC)Òîëüêî íå óõîäèòå íèêóäà!
Íåóãîìîííûé Ïèíêó â óæàñå
Ïåäàíò
Àêàé
Date: 2002-02-07 10:26 am (UTC)Re: Àêàé
Date: 2002-02-07 02:36 pm (UTC)Ïðèâåäó åùå ðàç äëÿ òåõ, êòî íå ïîíÿë:
A monk once asked Master Tao-wu, "How can I keep a clear mind ?"
"If a thousand people call you and you don't turn your head," Tao-wu said, "you can say you have achieved something".