Ýòî õàéêó ÿ óæå êàê-òî ïðèâîäèë. Ïðèøëî âðåìÿ äàòü åãî äëÿ ïåðåâîäà. Ïîíèìàþ, ÷òî áóäåò òÿæåëî, íî óæàñíî èíòåðåñíî, ÷òî ïîëó÷èòñÿ.
Èññà.
Îðèãèíàë
Shoben no
tara-tara shita ya
kakitsubata
Ïåðåâîä ñëîâ
shoben - ìî÷à
no - ñóôôèêñ ïðèíàäëåæíîñòè, ò.å. "òàðà-òàðà ìî÷è"
tara-tara - çâóêîïîäðàæàíèå (êàï-êàï).
shita - âíèçó, ïîä
ya - ñì. íîìåð 2.
kakitsubata - öâåòû èðèñà.
Ïåðåâîä Áëàéñà:
Just below the pissing,
Drip, drip, drip, -
Iris flowers !
Êîììåíòàðèé Áëàéñà:
This is one of the best haiku ever written. It has everything in it. It overflows, overflowers.
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