Òóðíèðíîå õàéêó íîìåð 3

Èññà, êàê è áûëî ñêàçàíî.

Îðèãèíàë

さむしろや
鍋にすじか
天の川

Samushiro ya
Nabe ni sujikau
Ama-no-gawa


Ïåðåâîä ñëîâ

ya - ñì. íîìåð 2.
nabe - ãîðøîê. Ðàíüøå, íàâåðíîå, ïðîñòî áûë ãîðøîê, à òåïåðü – ñïåöèàëüíûé òàêîé ãîðøîê ñ ãîðåëêîé. Íè îäíà âå÷åðèíêà íå îáõîäèòñÿ áåç òîãî, ÷òîáû òóäà íå ñâàëèëè â êó÷ó âñÿêèõ ðàêîâ è ïîòîì âàðèëè âåñü âå÷åð ïðÿìî íà ñòîëå (èç îïûòà).
ni - â. Ò.å. «â ãîðøêå» - ïðåäëîãè èäóò ïîñëå ñóùåñòâèòåëüíûõ.
ama-no-kawa - Ìëå÷íûé ïóòü.


Ïåðåâîä íåñêîëüêèõ ñëîâ íàéòè íå óäàëîñü – ïîýòîìó äàþ àíãëèéñêèé ïåðåâîä Áëàéñà:

A straw-mat;
The Milky Way aslant
In the saucepan.

À âîò åãî êîììåíòàðèé, êîòîðûé ìíå íðàâèòñÿ äàæå áîëüøå, ÷åì ñàìî õàéêó:

The greatness of Issa consists in his putting the Galaxy into the stew-pot.

Äî ïîíåäåëüíèêà !