catpad

You're viewing

catpad's journal
Create a Dreamwidth Account Learn More

Reload page in style: site light

Ýòî õàéêó ÿ óæå êàê-òî ïðèâîäèë. Ïðèøëî âðåìÿ äàòü åãî äëÿ ïåðåâîäà. Ïîíèìàþ, ÷òî áóäåò òÿæåëî, íî óæàñíî èíòåðåñíî, ÷òî ïîëó÷èòñÿ.

Èññà.

Îðèãèíàë

Shoben no
tara-tara shita ya
kakitsubata

Ïåðåâîä ñëîâ

shoben - ìî÷à
no - ñóôôèêñ ïðèíàäëåæíîñòè, ò.å. "òàðà-òàðà ìî÷è"
tara-tara - çâóêîïîäðàæàíèå (êàï-êàï).
shita - âíèçó, ïîä
ya - ñì. íîìåð 2.
kakitsubata - öâåòû èðèñà.

Ïåðåâîä Áëàéñà:

Just below the pissing,
Drip, drip, drip, -
Iris flowers !

Êîììåíòàðèé Áëàéñà:

This is one of the best haiku ever written. It has everything in it. It overflows, overflowers.

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

From:

gianthare.livejournal.com

Íåóæåëè Âû ñàìè íå ìîæåòå? Ëàäíî, åñëè

catpad ýòèì íå çàéì¸òñÿ, òî ÿ ÷åðåç ïàðó ÷àñîâ çàïîùó.

From:

avva.livejournal.com

Èçâèíèòå, ýòî äåëî ïðèíöèïà ;) Ðàçâå æ ÿ ýòî äîëæåí âûèñêèâàòü? Âåäóùèé êîíêóðñà äîëæåí â óñëîâèè äàâàòü, êàê â ïðåäûäóùèõ òóðàõ è äåëàë.

From:

catpad.livejournal.com

Íó âîò, íàïàëè íà âåäóùåãî, çàêëåâàëè. À ÿ, ìåæäó ïðî÷èì, öåëûé äåíü ïûòàþñü íà ýòîò âîïðîñ îòâåòèòü, òîëüêî ÷òî äî íîðìàëüíûõ øðèôòîâ äîáðàëñÿ.
Òàê âîò - ÿ ÷åñòíî ñòàðàëñÿ, íî íå ïîëó÷àåòñÿ ó ìåíÿ íóæíûé èåðîãëèô èçâëå÷ü - íó íèêàê !
×òî-òî ó íèõ ñ "ìî÷îé" íåëàäû, ìîæåò ïîëèòêîððåêòíîñòü çàåëà ?
Íó, äóìàþ - ïðîíåñåò, íèêòî íå çàìåòèò. Äà îò Àââû íå óñêîëüçí¸øü...
Åñëè

gianthare ñìîæåò - áóäåò åìó ïî÷¸ò.

À åñëè ÷åñòíî - íåóæåëè ïîìîãàåò ?